Miss this moment
Rustling leaves
Murmur of impatience
Breeze left in haste
More leaves to rustle
Amber colour
No slowing down
Move fast and quick
More miles to cover
Push and shove
Jump the queue
Reach the temple first
More demands to make
Mad rush every day
Who gains and what?
Miss this moment, and
Crave for the future ones
13 comments:
Push and shove
Jump the queue
Reach the temple first
More demands to make
Fine lines that made me smile.Your erses are short and sweet
KParthasarathi: Thanks :-)
good lines!! We miss so much of the journey just because of the hurry to reach its end..and once at the end..we miss the journey..such an irony!!
beautiful lines..
in our urge for making it to the front, we fail to see and enjoy the beauty of the journey..
loved it :-)
Suajta: Thanks :-)
Amal: Thanks :-)
neautifully said in a few words..how we try and hurry ourselves up than living the experience!!
Rush: Thanks :-)
Keep trying, keep trying.
Hmm .....good one,
depicting very well, that urge n rush to make it front..
Who gains and what?
liked the question... worth pondering..
First timer over here..lotsa poems to catch up..
keep writing..
Sekhar: Sure, thanks :-)
Devil Incarnate: Thanks :-)
Vinz: Thanks :-)
This part is what I loved best:
"Mad rush every day
Who gains and what?
Miss this moment, and
Crave for the future ones"
It sums up our daily chaotic scramble so beautifully.
all the poems are good.. this one i liked very much esp the last 4 lines.. simple way of writing.. keep wrting...
thanks to shravan for bring these to my notice..
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