Sunday, July 5, 2009

Miss this moment

Rustling leaves
Murmur of impatience
Breeze left in haste
More leaves to rustle

Amber colour
No slowing down
Move fast and quick
More miles to cover

Push and shove
Jump the queue
Reach the temple first
More demands to make

Mad rush every day
Who gains and what?
Miss this moment, and
Crave for the future ones

13 comments:

KParthasarathi July 5, 2009 at 5:02 PM  

Push and shove
Jump the queue
Reach the temple first
More demands to make

Fine lines that made me smile.Your erses are short and sweet

Bindhu Unny July 7, 2009 at 9:12 PM  

KParthasarathi: Thanks :-)

sujata July 10, 2009 at 2:08 PM  

good lines!! We miss so much of the journey just because of the hurry to reach its end..and once at the end..we miss the journey..such an irony!!

Amal Bose July 10, 2009 at 8:14 PM  

beautiful lines..
in our urge for making it to the front, we fail to see and enjoy the beauty of the journey..
loved it :-)

Bindhu Unny July 10, 2009 at 10:25 PM  

Suajta: Thanks :-)

Amal: Thanks :-)

Rush July 11, 2009 at 3:57 AM  

neautifully said in a few words..how we try and hurry ourselves up than living the experience!!

Bindhu Unny July 14, 2009 at 10:08 AM  

Rush: Thanks :-)

Sekhar July 14, 2009 at 11:07 PM  

Keep trying, keep trying.

Devil Incarnate... July 20, 2009 at 3:45 PM  

Hmm .....good one,
depicting very well, that urge n rush to make it front..

Vinz aka Vinu July 22, 2009 at 2:35 PM  

Who gains and what?

liked the question... worth pondering..

First timer over here..lotsa poems to catch up..

keep writing..

Bindhu Unny July 25, 2009 at 10:30 PM  

Sekhar: Sure, thanks :-)

Devil Incarnate: Thanks :-)

Vinz: Thanks :-)

Swapna Raghu Sanand September 23, 2009 at 10:43 AM  

This part is what I loved best:

"Mad rush every day
Who gains and what?
Miss this moment, and
Crave for the future ones"

It sums up our daily chaotic scramble so beautifully.

SindhuBhairavi December 1, 2009 at 9:59 PM  

all the poems are good.. this one i liked very much esp the last 4 lines.. simple way of writing.. keep wrting...

thanks to shravan for bring these to my notice..

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