Friday, January 22, 2010

Sometimes

Sometimes,
All we need is
A shoulder to lean on
But shoulders are sparse now

Sometimes,
All we need is
A smile to cheer us
But smiles are miles away

Sometimes,
All we need is
A word of comfort
But words are beyond reach

Sometimes,
All we need is
A little air to breathe
But air is full of airs

6 comments:

KParthasarathi January 22, 2010 at 5:38 PM  

Wow.I liked this immensely.
The last verse is superb!!
Sometimes,
All we need is
A little air to breathe
But air is full of airs

lakshmi January 26, 2010 at 7:06 AM  

most of the time all we need
is a good reminder............to remind us of all these....
yours is one.....

we just seem to not find time for these valuable things in life
nice post...

Anuradha Shankar February 7, 2010 at 9:04 PM  

Hey, these are really good!!!!!

KParthasarathi September 30, 2010 at 5:03 AM  

why is your blog dormant?Your poems are elegant and beautiful.Please write lots oof them.
Thanks for the comment.What is your email ID?
kpartha12@gmail.com

hope and love October 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM  

we can get all that.. from within us
:)

Sureshkumar Punjhayil October 6, 2010 at 10:39 AM  

Always...!

Good one. Best wishes...!!!

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