Friday, January 22, 2010

Sometimes

Sometimes,
All we need is
A shoulder to lean on
But shoulders are sparse now

Sometimes,
All we need is
A smile to cheer us
But smiles are miles away

Sometimes,
All we need is
A word of comfort
But words are beyond reach

Sometimes,
All we need is
A little air to breathe
But air is full of airs

6 comments:

KParthasarathi January 22, 2010 at 5:38 PM  

Wow.I liked this immensely.
The last verse is superb!!
Sometimes,
All we need is
A little air to breathe
But air is full of airs

lakshmi January 26, 2010 at 7:06 AM  

most of the time all we need
is a good reminder............to remind us of all these....
yours is one.....

we just seem to not find time for these valuable things in life
nice post...

Anu February 7, 2010 at 9:04 PM  

Hey, these are really good!!!!!

KParthasarathi September 30, 2010 at 5:03 AM  

why is your blog dormant?Your poems are elegant and beautiful.Please write lots oof them.
Thanks for the comment.What is your email ID?
kpartha12@gmail.com

hope and love October 5, 2010 at 12:23 PM  

we can get all that.. from within us
:)

Sureshkumar Punjhayil October 6, 2010 at 10:39 AM  

Always...!

Good one. Best wishes...!!!

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